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 My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)

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PostSubject: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Tue May 06, 2008 4:31 pm

The novel I've been working on for some time now. I've only got a few chapters written, its mostly the plot as a whole that's in development now. It's a fantasy/steampunk type universe. I hope you enjoy it. If it's horrible, let me know. If you see mistakes, or can see some potential improvements to be made, PLEASE let me know. (PM, Post here, email, whatever, just be honest)

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Chapter 1: City Filth


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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Tue May 06, 2008 4:43 pm

Rockin, I'll check it out when I get home. From what i read of the first couple of paragraph it seems very good. I'll vote once I've read the whole thing.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Tue May 06, 2008 8:29 pm

Hmm..I noticed most of the voting options are negative in nature.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 9:39 am

I think that I'm my harshest critic.
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PostSubject: Chapter 2   Wed May 07, 2008 10:06 am

Chapter 2: Lessons and Modification

Maybe should have made a way that you could change your poll?
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 10:18 am

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Chapter 2: Lessons and Modification

Maybe should have made a way that you could change your poll?

From the FAQ:

"As with posts, polls can only be edited by the original poster, a moderator, or board administrator. To edit a poll, click the first post in the topic, which always has the poll associated with it. If no one has cast a vote then users can delete the poll or edit any poll option. However, if people have already placed votes only moderators or administrators can edit or delete it; this is to prevent people rigging polls by changing options mid-way through a poll"

Let me know the options you want and I can change them up a bit so long as they aren't clearly altering the votes already received.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 12:05 pm

Oh, well it's no big deal. Comments are just as good as a poll. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 12:53 pm

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Oh, well it's no big deal. Comments are just as good as a poll. Smile

I've always heard you liked the pole.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 1:10 pm

I like that too, but only if the dancer is wearing a schoolgirl uniform. looks exactly like my wife, I mean. pale
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 1:17 pm

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I like that too, but only if the dancer is wearing a schoolgirl uniform. looks exactly like my wife, I mean. pale

lol, nicely done sir.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 07, 2008 4:30 pm

Anywho, those of you who are just joining us, the second chapter link is on the first page.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Mon May 12, 2008 2:08 pm

Rob wrote:
Chapter 2: Lessons and Modification

Maybe should have made a way that you could change your poll?

Gonna try and get to this today.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Tue May 20, 2008 2:24 pm

Haven't had a chance to read all of this yet, but what I have read seemed very well done as well.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 21, 2008 4:03 pm

Chapter 3: Rescue and Viol Caps

Enjoy. Hopefully.
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PostSubject: Re: My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)   Wed May 21, 2008 5:40 pm

Rob wrote:
Chapter 3: Rescue and Viol Caps

Enjoy. Hopefully.
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