Siren Moon

Siren Moon

Horizons golden shimmering
Along the ocean's flow
It reaches out to touch the face
Of sunset's molten glow
The prince of shadowed melodies
Has taken up the tune
Of hallowed mountain mysteries
On darkened Siren Moon

The prism clutched by tangled vines
Cannot escape its doom
Through sunbeams glint the broken shards
In rainbow speckled gloom
In silence cries the ancient race
Before the sanguine throne
With whisper blades they slay themselves
Upon the cobbled stone

We bathe in rivers agony
Beneath black, jagged ice
The elders gather blazed in gold
Around the crystal vice
The prince is laughing merrily
Draped in blood upon his tomb
The sky in painful ecstasy
Cries out on Siren Moon

I think I like this one best of all the ones you've posted so far. Its very descriptive and flows very well.

Thanks. Most of these are actually songs for my band that I've written. I've a melody for this one, but we haven't actually put into song form.