My novel Untitled (W.I.P.)

The novel I've been working on for some time now. I've only got a few chapters written, its mostly the plot as a whole that's in development now. It's a fantasy/steampunk type universe. I hope you enjoy it. If it's horrible, let me know. If you see mistakes, or can see some potential improvements to be made, PLEASE let me know. (PM, Post here, email, whatever, just be honest)

Thanks.

Chapter 1: City Filth

Rockin, I'll check it out when I get home. From what i read of the first couple of paragraph it seems very good. I'll vote once I've read the whole thing.

Hmm..I noticed most of the voting options are negative in nature.

I think that I'm my harshest critic.

Chapter 2: Lessons and Modification

Maybe should have made a way that you could change your poll?

Rob wrote:

Chapter 2: Lessons and Modification

Maybe should have made a way that you could change your poll?

From the FAQ:

"As with posts, polls can only be edited by the original poster, a moderator, or board administrator. To edit a poll, click the first post in the topic, which always has the poll associated with it. If no one has cast a vote then users can delete the poll or edit any poll option. However, if people have already placed votes only moderators or administrators can edit or delete it; this is to prevent people rigging polls by changing options mid-way through a poll"

Let me know the options you want and I can change them up a bit so long as they aren't clearly altering the votes already received.

Oh, well it's no big deal. Comments are just as good as a poll.

Rob wrote:

Oh, well it's no big deal. Comments are just as good as a poll.

I've always heard you liked the pole.

I like that too, but only if the dancer is wearing a schoolgirl uniform. looks exactly like my wife, I mean.

Rob wrote:

I like that too, but only if the dancer is wearing a schoolgirl uniform. looks exactly like my wife, I mean.

lol, nicely done sir.

Anywho, those of you who are just joining us, the second chapter link is on the first page.

Rob wrote:

Chapter 2: Lessons and Modification

Maybe should have made a way that you could change your poll?

Gonna try and get to this today.

Haven't had a chance to read all of this yet, but what I have read seemed very well done as well.

Chapter 3: Rescue and Viol Caps

Enjoy. Hopefully.

Rob wrote:

Chapter 3: Rescue and Viol Caps

Enjoy. Hopefully.

I think you have confidence issues. Why not join the army? worked wonders for me

Meet interesting people, kill them.